the gift

25 Dec

wonder breaks with the dawn
peace befalls the troubled
empty hearts grow hopeful
for a moment
magic happens

© 12.25.10

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13 Responses to “the gift”

  1. scriptorobscura December 27, 2010 at 1:25 am #

    This is beautiful. Thanks for sharing it!

  2. Sumit Sarkar December 27, 2010 at 12:40 pm #

    Wow..so much optimism..
    I love the moment of magic..
    🙂

  3. Ramesh Sood December 28, 2010 at 8:52 am #

    Yes, magic happens.. every moment..thanks!!!!

  4. DULCE December 28, 2010 at 2:27 pm #

    i loved this! indeed
    great one shot

  5. Claudia December 28, 2010 at 2:35 pm #

    wonder breaks with the dawn..what a beautiful gift your poem is..full of hope…thank you

  6. shanellis December 28, 2010 at 2:40 pm #

    Really enjoyed the short! Thanks for sharing!

  7. dustus December 28, 2010 at 2:47 pm #

    Beautiful dawns do break with peace and wonder. Nice write!

    • Laura Hegfield December 28, 2010 at 3:13 pm #

      the gift of surrendering to the moment…that is magical, and always a possibility:)

      • Desert Rose December 28, 2010 at 3:56 pm #

        yes..magic happens..this was beautiful to feel..:)

  8. brian December 28, 2010 at 5:06 pm #

    you know…that kind of magic…i like it…let it break!

  9. Monkey Man December 29, 2010 at 9:50 am #

    Love those moments. It is attitude that keeps them happening. A fine One Shot.

    Fate created my One Shot.

  10. Steve Isaak December 29, 2010 at 1:39 pm #

    Excellent, perfect work – relatable, on different levels. 🙂

  11. hollyheir January 1, 2011 at 3:03 pm #

    Like today 1-1-11 so symmetrical with newness
    with promise of newness so top of the world
    as though we have reached a summit, a number one-ness
    hopeful, beautiful, and full of love.
    Thanks for the reassurance. Gay @beachanny

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