the eve

24 Dec

the night is at hand
children lay hushed and waiting
dreaming miracles

love has taken to the sky
the joy as deep as snowfall

© 12.24.10

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* linked at big tent poetry

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13 Responses to “the eve”

  1. vivinfrance December 24, 2010 at 7:39 am #

    That really captures the moment.

  2. Christopher December 24, 2010 at 8:47 am #

    Thank you for this holiday variant of haiku.

  3. pamela December 24, 2010 at 9:14 am #

    Nicely put red chair.
    Pamela

  4. mark December 24, 2010 at 1:01 pm #

    Dreamy, wonderful.

  5. Laurie Kolp December 26, 2010 at 6:03 am #

    Lovely recapture of a child’s anticipation on Christmas Eve! Hope you had a great Christmas!

  6. deb December 26, 2010 at 7:33 pm #

    I like the brevity of these red chairs, Rob. Nice work.

  7. Sweetest n the Gale December 27, 2010 at 7:07 am #

    I could feel the joy and the anticipation…lovely!

  8. Reflections December 27, 2010 at 9:54 am #

    Dreamy thoughts of the night… well done.

  9. Sumit Sarkar December 27, 2010 at 12:38 pm #

    “the joy as deep as snowfall”
    Nice..
    I love it 🙂

  10. Mary Bach December 28, 2010 at 5:24 am #

    Beautiful – these few lines say so much…really well done.

  11. Ramesh Sood December 28, 2010 at 8:51 am #

    Lovely poetry.. I like the style.. refreshing..

  12. Jingle December 28, 2010 at 12:12 pm #

    love has taken to the sky
    the joy as deep as snowfall..

    enjoyed your style.
    well done.
    xx

  13. Jingle Poetry December 28, 2010 at 12:13 pm #

    Greetings, how are you?

    Welcome join us at potluck week 16, with theme as celebrations and festivities..

    you have rocking talent, we will be thrilled to see you join us and become part of the community.

    We value your support, Have A blessed Holiday!
    Best Wishes 4 the year of 2011….

    share 1 to 3 poems that are old or unrelated to our theme if you are FIRST TIME Participant to our community.

    xoxox

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