11 Dec

sailing on a skiff of dreams
among clouds of wonder
to mystical ports of call
where all imagined
is in your grasp

oh to stay this course…
but fast – daybreak approaches

© 12.11.10


24 Responses to “dreams”

  1. kaykuala December 11, 2010 at 1:43 pm #

    Yes, often times we would wish good dreams would linger on.

  2. vivinfrance December 11, 2010 at 9:08 am #

    Decidedly wondrous. Bravo.

  3. Sharp Little Pencil December 11, 2010 at 9:15 am #

    Dreams afford me passage to amazing ports of call… I meet people I’ve always admired – and sometimes go on crazy adventures! But this was a patient, gentle offering.

    Thank you so much. Found you at Writer’s Isle.

    Amy Barlow Liberatore

  4. gospelwriter December 11, 2010 at 1:02 pm #

    I do love the world of dreams – or at least dreams like this. I wonder sometimes where the limitations suddenly come from when, waking up, I think that what I dreamed is not possible in the real world. What if I couldn’t think that thought… what then?

    Lovely poetic response to the “wondrous” prompt.

  5. 1sojournal December 11, 2010 at 4:35 pm #

    Gentle reminder that all too often sunrise comes and dreams must depart. Like the soft feel of your words,


  6. Giovanni Cucullo December 11, 2010 at 4:51 pm #

    “Dreams are illustrations… from the book your soul is writing about you.” ~Marsha Norman
    Very nice!

  7. Reflections December 11, 2010 at 8:11 pm #

    Beautiful dreams lend to the dawn of a new day.

  8. booguloo December 12, 2010 at 3:33 pm #

    What a great dream!

  9. Jingle December 12, 2010 at 4:27 pm #

    simply beautiful.

  10. Sherry Blue Sky December 12, 2010 at 4:41 pm #

    “But fast, daybreak approaches”…….a lovely poem.

  11. Old Ollie December 13, 2010 at 10:06 am #

    Nice work – an enjoyable piece.

  12. wayne December 13, 2010 at 10:45 am #

    WONDROUS indeed ….thanks for sharing your words

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